To write or not to write? That is the question. The power of words: Intent, Context, Meaning, Translation and Communicating
Whether it is nobler in the hearts and minds of all good bees to be correct in grammar, punctuation and sentence structure or, can one still use the power of words as a novice to convey intent, context, meaning, and translation in the art of communicating? Whether good at writing or not can one still convey a sentiment about things they feel a passion for or care enough about to write, comment or respond?
For me, writing is a challenging exploration of the world I live in. It reflects the good, bad or indifferent nature of my skill or lack thereof, in using prose in ordinary form, without any coherent metrical structure. For me it is an attempt to make sense of that world along the pathways of my journey.
Originally I was going to share a few articles that I have written that had specific meaning to me, and explain why I shared them in the first place. Instead I just decided to write this to you, my fellow bees, as an acknowledgement of the power of words. Their intent. Their context. Their meaning. Their translation. How they can be used effectively or not to communicate.
I am writing this because I recently received some very sound, focused, well intentioned, and constructive criticism on my writing abilities. It was focused on my use of grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure, particularly on one of my posts.
In sharing this I just wanted you all to know that I acknowledge I am not a good writer and apologize to each of you for my inability to follow an effective and proper writing style. My intent, as with many on this site, has always been genuine. A platform that allows us to merely speak up about something we feel passionate about, exchange ideas, share something personal, respond to something someone has posted, convey a business opportunity, or in some cases to step out of ones comfort zone. In my journey down the path of writing and poetry, it is truly a road less traveled.
I acknowledge that my grammar is terrible. My punctuation leaves much to be desired. I sometimes use run on sentences. I sometimes use words that are incorrect and more often than not misspelled because of my fat fingers. I would like to blame it on my smart phone for changing something and I just don’t realize it until it is too late. But alas, that would not be a truism.
Know that I truly appreciate each of you and the fact that so many of you are such good writers and convey such great content. I will try to do better before I write again, or if I feel compelled to post something like this before I can get my act together, I will at least try to be partially coherent.
As you indulge me, let me throw out a humbling plea. Be patient with me. I am new to this writing stuff and to be honest, had to beg my freshman English Professor to give me a C. I had to do a lot of extra credit work to bring that up, and still fell way short of her expectations. But somehow, someway she saw something in me and what I was trying to accomplish in my “Pig Latin” approach to writing and encouraged me to keep working at it. I still remember her comment when she informed me that I "deserved" a C in her class. "Keep refining your mind and use your voice in writing to express the good that you are trying to convey." In that simple statement she not only conveyed the true nature and essence of a teacher, but helped me understand that learning would be a life long experience. In that one statement, she taught me and made me realize that despite the flaws--despite the challenges, one (as she did) can and should look just under the surface or in between the lines and see whats inside. And on the writing front, that is why I used E.L. Doctorow's quote. It is a life long journey of exploration and discovery.
Since I can’t really blame it on my smart phone, I often write either on the spur of the moment, during fleeting moments of opportunity, sometimes late at night or early in the morning and, yes, others times while on my smart phone. Not a good thing based on the combination of often doing so without my glasses and, did I mention, I have fat thumbs.
Regardless, I write because I find something of interest or want to make a point; as illogical and incoherent as my ramblings may be. I write because a topic that has caught my eye and I either want to comment on it, or it has energized me to just say something from my own personal perspective. I write because there is something that I am passionate about. I write because I feel compelled to say something about a given subject. And more often than not, I write because I have been inspired by one of you.
In acknowledging my challenges, I understand that my use of words is not refined in the world of writing. But in writing, I have found comfort in expressing a view, acknowledging something that someone else has written, or simply find that in putting something down in writing it is both therapeutic and helps me navigate the challenges along my journey.
So as part of my life lesson in writing, I will simply leave you with an excerpt from one of my posts when I was fairly new to this site.
“Be simple my friends, stay thirsty and make a difference along the byways and pathways of your journey. I hope that in reading this and in taking your own individual single steps that you can find a gem or two despite potential typos and incoherent sentence structure. Whether you subscribe to any of this, I hope that you make a difference in a world that needs difference making.
Let me be clear up front--I write for me. I write because something has moved me to at least voice an opinion on a topic. I write to express a view on something that I am passionate about.
I am a digital immigrant. I am a person that just wants to make a difference.
- I am not an emotional intelligence guru.
- I am not a big data aficionado.
- I am not an insight or knowledge management "C"-suite person.
- I am not a Pulitzer Prize kind of author.
- I am not a Nobel Peace Prize kind of transformer.
I am, as Lynyrd Skynyrd might say, a simple kind of man. I am me. I believe in me; and I believe in you! That is why I write. And for that, I am thankful to each one of you who have taken the time to read, like, find relevant and comment on any of my musings as they have been posted.
In writing I attempt to use the opportunity, through the mysteries of it all, to thoughtfully and in as civil a manner as possible provide a personal expression on any given topic in a hope that in my simplistic world of insight I might just make a difference; one person--one step at a time.”
Thank you to each of you for your patience and indulgence despite my flaws and challenged writing skills.
Keep making a difference. You do for me.
Disclaimer: The views and opinions expressed in this post are solely those of the author
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Joel Anderson
5 years ago #55
Thank you YORLEDY VIVAS . Practice indeed.
YORLEDY VIVAS
5 years ago #54
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #53
#64#63 Sara Jacobovici Thank you so much. "We rise by lifting others." Robert Ingersoll
Sara Jacobovici
6 years ago #52
Sara Jacobovici
6 years ago #51
Sara Jacobovici
6 years ago #50
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #49
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #48
#34 #35 #41 #49 #51 #55 #56 #57 Wow. What a great conversation. What great insights and recommendations. Thank you so much. To all on this conversation thread, I truly appreciate all of your comments, recommendations and insights. I have and continue to learn so much from all of you. "I exist as I am, that is enough." Walt Whitman And may I add: You exist as your are, and that is enough. We exist as we are, and that is enough. May not be a good metaphor, but in thinking of a moment in the movie Dead Poets Society, I see myself standing on my desk, looking out to each of you and saying: "Oh Captains! My Captains!" Because of you, how I look forward to the future and remain energized and encouraged in taking additional steps along my path of exploration and the discoveries yet to come. How I remain focused on Carpe Diem. I may not seize every word. I may not seize every second, moment or day but thanks to each of you I will embrace the journey with renewed passion, and take that next step. Keep making a difference: one person, one step at a time.
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #47
#34 #35 #41 #49 #51 #55 #56 #57 Wow. What a great conversation. What great insights and recommendations. Thank you so much. To al on this conversation thread, I truly appreciate all of your comments, recommendations and insights. I have and continue to learn so much from all of you. "I exist as I am, that is enough." Walt Whitman And may I add: You exist as your are, and that is enough. We exist as we are, and that is enough. May not be a good metaphor, but in thinking of a moment in the movie Dead Poets Society, I see myself standing on my desk, looking out to each of you and saying: "Oh Captains! My Captains!" Because of you, how I look forward to the future and remain energized and encouraged in taking additional steps along my path of exploration and the discoveries yet to come. How I remain focused on Carpe Diem. I may not seize every word. I may not seize every second, moment or day but thanks to each of you I will embrace the journey with renewed passion, and take that next step. Keep making a difference: one person, one step at a time.
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #46
#34 #35 #41 #49 #51 #55 #56 #57 Wow. What a great conversation. What great insights and recommendations. Thank you so much. To al on this conversation thread, I truly appreciate all of your comments, recommendations and insights. I have and continue to learn so much from all of you. "I exist as I am, that is enough." Walt Whitman And may I add: You exist as your are, and that is enough. We exist as we are, and that is enough. "Oh Captains! My Captains!" Because of you, how I look forward to the future and remain energized and encouraged in taking additional steps along my path of exploration and the discoveries yet to come. Thanks to each of you. Keep making a difference: one person, one step at a time.
Sarah Elkins
6 years ago #45
Thanks, Susan \ud83d\udc1d Rooks! Remember when you caught an error on one of my early LinkedIn posts... in the TITLE? Oy.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #44
"I'm not perfect but who are you to Judge me. You can teach me, coach me,offer constructive advice and motivate me but you don't judge me." I was going to leave this alone... It's not judgment!! (Jumping up and down; ripping my hair out; trying not to punch a wall.) I see writers I get excited about, and, most often, I simply suggest Grammerly. Once I made a suggestion about a certain punctuation, but offered no real clarification because I didn't want to offend. It was something I had been told not to do by an English professor years ago. I only say (in private) to use Grammerly. Only one person has thanked me for that advice. They found it to be helpful. Grammerly can be a great teacher. And hey--it's a program! You can't get mad at it (or so I thought.) I just assume those who are great writers naturally want to get better. Mybad I'm going to take a lesson from those in the know (yep--I mean you, Susan) and keep my mouth shut. If you want whatever help I am capable of giving you, I will do my best. Just ask. But Susan Is probably the very best one to ask. Gert Scholtz gave the best advice ever with his post: https://www.bebee.com/producer/@gert-scholtz/better-blogging-on-bebee-a-few-useful-tools. Any of Gert's treasures can be great teachers. I still have lots to learn and his tools will help me fill in gaps. I'm not a great teacher. I'm a doer. Perhaps when I impart to others what has been imparted to me, I seek to shore my own knowledge up.
🐝 Fatima G. Williams
6 years ago #43
🐝 Fatima G. Williams
6 years ago #42
🐝 Fatima G. Williams
6 years ago #41
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #40
Yes Joel Anderson. What a stimulating conversation you have created. And oh jeesh--proofing my own work... But I learn by doing it. I do it as best as I can. I wish I knew more. It took several hours, in one of my posts, to spot an improper preposition. It seems there will always be at least some mistakes I'll miss. I keep that in mind. There will always be someone who can do it better. I just do the best I can. I think this is true of everyone.
Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #39
Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #38
And it's someone we ALL need, Joyce \ud83d\udc1d Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee -- has alerted me to one of my own goofs, most often a letter left off a word or a word completely left out. It's really tough to proof our own work; we know what we meant and we see what think we wrote. So just knowing the rules isn't going to give us perfection; we still need to read what we've written carefully. See what you started, Joel Anderson? Many thanks!
Liesbeth Leysen, MSc.
6 years ago #37
Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #36
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #35
Thank you. You see? I can't even spell semicolons. I break the rules a lot. But as you said, I usually know why I'm breaking them. Other times, they are just mistakes. I always say, "A good editor is a writer's best friend."
Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #34
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #33
Do a discussion on semi-colons, willya? They are a nemesis of mine. I bet lots of people would like such a discussion.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #32
I so agree.
Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #31
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #30
Hell no--I don't do that. But there are those red flags I talked about. They cause me to stumble in my reading. If they cause me to stumble, it does so for others. Flow is so damned important. Perhaps I am being a mother hen, but I want to read a Book by You. Your writing is enthralling other than those hiccups. And I see you sticking by your guns to literary death as I once was inclined to do. Professor John Nelson saw something in my writing that caused him to create a course for me so he could mentor me one-on-one. Not everyone is blessed by such an event, so I try to pass on what he nudged me toward. You cause me to realize why he nudged rather than outright told me. My attitude was exactly like yours.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #29
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #28
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #27
hahahaha--the point is, they are books.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #26
Hell no. Remember writing is a journey. There are places we visit in that journey. So many times I am able to say--been there, done that. I finally relented. I learned. I had to. There are people that know more than me that forced me to, and I'm glad they took the time to do so. I'm just paying it forward. I have been working on a book for eons. I want to get it published. I was taught by those who know more than me that my stylistic adventures would get me thrown in the wastebasket. So--do I want to live in a wastebasket and stick to my guns, or do I want to relent and live on a bookshelf? I choose the bookshelf.
Harvey Lloyd
6 years ago #25
"That's an incorrect assumption." Regardless of grammar, this is a conclusion statement whereby you assert that i, me or the writer did not experience judgement. Somewhat bold. "If "I" am willing to take the time..." A statement that one persons time may be more valuable than another's. "...see promise" this is the assumption. "But you are right." A remark of disdain, as i am sure that you really did not mean that i may be right. The finish, withholding expertise. No difficulty, with good/bad grammar, to miss your point of judgement.
Lada 🏡 Prkic
6 years ago #24
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #23
Plus I just learned today I have the chance of getting my MFA. If you think I'm a twit now, wait until those 'experts' start pounding 'the rules' into me.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #22
"Social media is an "instant" medium, and what one writes has a short shelf life. I don't "craft" what I write on social media, so it has errors. ... To make a difference on social media involves a style more like talking. Sometimes we talk coherently. Sometimes we make wrong word choices. We stutter. We forget what we were saying. I look at writing on social media like that." You're right. It's just sometimes I see something I think is worth publishing but for those grammar mistakes. The Guardians of that Gate (hardcover publishing) are mostly Grammarians. I was taught that if I wanted to publish, those were the people that make these rules. So I try to be careful throughout my posts to follow the rules. They very well could be an unwanted resume.
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #21
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #20
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #19
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #18
#5 #6 #7 #8 #9 #10 #11 #12 #13 #14 #15 #18 #19 In writing this, it was part of my inwardly focused reflection, of me. In writing this and with your comments, it underscored what I like about beBee. The very nature of this affinity based networking platform. beBee is chalk full of people from all over the world and yet as you all have so effectively shown in your comments, whether we agree or disagree we remain engaged, interactive and positive humans. I just now got out of a meeting, have had about 15 minutes between events, and have returned to this post to re-read the comments since I posted this. I have truly and simply savored every comment. Not only on this post, but the plethora of others that show the true nature of a great platform for each of us to beBee us. Me, you, we. And for that, I just want to say thank you. Keep making a difference: one word, one comment, one buzz, one article, one step and one person at a time. As for me my "journey of a thousand miles" will continue because of you. And because of you, I will learn as I go. You all rock!!!
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #17
#5 #6 #7 #8 #9 #10 #11 #12 #13 #14 #15 #18 #19 Thank you all for not only reading this but you thoughtful comments and words. The article I referenced is not really that important but the interaction, encouragement and engagement is what I find refreshing on this platform called beBee. Originally my intent was to only post the article here as it represents a comfort zone in my attempts at writing. After a period of time, the subject surfaced over and over again on other platforms, so I decided to share it on a few of them. It was on one of them that I received a query about who the author was. I explained for good or bad, that would be me. We then went into an offline personal discussion. The comments, recommendations etc. came from an casual acquaintance and someone, despite the short time we have been personally and virtually connected, is someone whom I share an affinity with and consider a friend. His points were all valid, well received and made me think about my public facing approach.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #16
Down boy. I meant no offense. If your goal is to publish on social media--easy peasy. I just thought you might like to see your work in a book on a shelf.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #15
you're right--some writers got away with it. Hemingway was famous for his use, or lack of use of commas. But there are HUGE red flags for an editor that gets your work circular file on the first page these days. There are just too damned many writers. Hemingway told tales of faraway places that ruled the mind and he was a journalist. Twain networked like a bastard. You, Chas \u270c\ufe0f Wyatt, are a gifted storyteller. I love your work. Problem is, storytellers are a dime a dozen.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #14
That is a common misperception. The rules of grammar seldom change. They provide clarity. Thank you, grammar gods and goddesses. I'm a better writer because of you.
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #13
Ahhh--that's it--it is viewed as judgment. That's an incorrect assumption. If I am willing to take the time to make an observation, it is because I see so damned much promise. But you're right. I am now going to take what others have taught me; tuck it in a pouch; keep my mouth shut and go on my merry way
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #12
I agree wholeheartedly. It is so true that the only to learn how to write is by writing. If I had been afraid to make mistakes, I never would have learned from them. Susan \ud83d\udc1d Rooks is a Goddess in my book. And there never was a truer statement than: "Many professional writers use editors because they know they make mistakes too. Great topic." The problem I find with emerging writers is that they have egos the size of elephants. My professor mentors often seemed to walk on eggshells around me and gave me gentle nudges in the right direction. I wish they had screamed out my mistakes to me. They had the knowledge, and now I will never know what advantages their expertise might have given me. I do okay, but I wanted to be the best I could be. There comes a time in a writer's life when ego drops away and s/he seeks out the expertise of others. I'm often giddy over someone with the expertise looks at my work and edits it. It was a milestone for me. Someone with a better eye looked over https://www.bebee.com/producer/@joyce-bowen/staying-safe. She picked up on the shitstorm I have with semi-colons. I knew then she was good. I adopted all but a few of her corrections. They were mostly punctuation errors. Emerging writers often guard their work like a lioness with a cub. That's a mistake many make. When good emerging writers wrap themselves in their egos, they stagnate. Advice is often looked at as an attack. There have been many times I know I could help, but I don't. I don't like tangling with lions.
Harvey Lloyd
6 years ago #11
Gert Scholtz
6 years ago #10
Pascal Derrien
6 years ago #9
Lisa Gallagher
6 years ago #8
Ali Anani
6 years ago #7
Ian Weinberg
6 years ago #6
David B. Grinberg
6 years ago #5
Joel Anderson
6 years ago #4
Joyce \ud83d\udc1d Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBeejoy thank you for a great response. Keep making a difference
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #3
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #2
Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
6 years ago #1