Wednesday Words: Are You Guilty of Using Too Many Adverbs?
All parts of speech have their uses; together they allow us to write complete sentences and thoughts. We need adjectives, adverbs, conjunctions, interjections, nouns, prepositions, pronouns, and verbs (for more on these and their definitions, click here) to work together in harmony, to flesh out our ideas, to make those ideas come alive.
What we don’t need is constant repetition of any one kind of word, especially adverbs.
Adverbs modify / describe adjectives, verbs, and other adverbs, so it’s easy to overuse them.
If all the articles that have been written through the years on this topic were printed on paper, there would be enough to sop up all the water from the recent hurricanes. All I want to do here is show you how you can shorten and strengthen your writing, merely by taking out many of the adverbs you’re using.
If you use a strong verb, it’s unlikely you’ll need to modify it with an adverb: “She loudly yelled at the sky!” or “She quietly whispered her answer.”
Doesn’t “yell” already contain the idea of being loud? Doesn’t “whispered” already contain the idea of being quiet?
“Allan was really, really mad.” Hmmm. Could you change that to “Allan was irate!” or “Allan was crazed!”?
“Kim is a very obedient child.” Could that be changed to “Kim is an obedient child.”? What does “very” add to the idea of being obedient?
“Jack had a very unique idea.” No. Unique always stands alone; it means one of a kind. It cannot be modified.
The list below shows the top 10 overused adverbs, many of which are probably in your latest article/blog. And although we usually think of adverbs as ending in “ly,” notice that a couple of these don’t. (And not all words that end in “ly” are adverbs; a few are adjectives, like friendly, cowardly, and neighborly.)
1. Very
2. Often
3. Really
4. Totally
5. Actually
6. Suddenly
7. Probably
8. Hopefully
9. Perfectly
10. Usually
And before you get all upset, thinking I’m advocating for removing ALL adverbs, please understand that I’m not. I am saying that we can all use a moment to think about the impact of our words, whether they’re necessary or are just cluttering up our writing. If they serve a purpose, use them. If not, don’t.
Take the challenge: Use the grammar checker built into your writing program / platform or check out one of the online ones like Grammarly or the others mentioned here. See if you’re guilty of using too many adverbs.
Our goals should be clarity and ease of reading; otherwise, we risk losing our readers. And although we’re supposed to be writing because we want to, I’m sure most of us also want to have readers engage in a positive way with us!
I would love to know what you found in YOUR own writing after you try out one of the writing checkers. Which words caught the checker’s “eye”?
Are the other issues you find worth mentioning to help us all write more smoothly?
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And we're all "guilty" of that, @Alexa Steele!
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There are many things I would like to send our so-called POTUS, but advice on adverbs, Jim Cody \ud83d\udc1d Brand Ambassador? I'd rather send him a get-out-of-town card. Permanently.
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Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #6
If you knew me better, @Harvey Lloyd, you'd know I don't rap knuckles. I may wince now and then, but hey. And I don't even own a red pen, although the Track Changes does use red as its first color to show typos. And you just gave me -- and anyone who reads your comments -- a whole new way of looking at adverbs! I might have had a fleeting thought about the writer's intention, but I don't think I ever took a hard look at how using extra adverbs can show a writer's negative view of someone like that. See? You can teach an old dog new tricks, and for that I thank you!
Susan 🐝 Rooks, The Grammar Goddess
6 years ago #5
Not consciously, Edward Lewellen, but I do know that the rules work most of the time but not all the time.
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You do know I depend on you to find a way in your comments to make me laugh, right, John Rylance? Thank you once again!
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